Sorry about the scholarship
Sorry about the scholarship dude. The animtion looks pretty cool though. Although, the whole "majestic" storyline doesn't work that well for festivals, so I'd suggest an intellectual humor or most likely for you, a drama. In case your wondering, the reason why the "majestic" stories don't work as well, is because they are usually looking for an extremely complex character design (yours was decent, but not there yet) or thinking up a world that hasn't been thought up yet, and drawing it and explaining it well.